Reynard City Out of Shape PG 7

Over all I think its great but a few things that I notice. Panel two has her holding her chest well it looks more like she got punched in the breast or she is checking for lumps. it it was higher or lower it woudl not seem like that to me but it does.

Now her Strength mode effect is ok but I wish it had a bolder color difference. because I have to look close to see what it says I wish it was like a brighter and warmer red.

Now on the final panel I love the gag but Her sleeves should hold her flab in because its a spandex or what ever suit. or at leave the red bands should try and hold in the flab some

I love how your style is here and Cant wait to see more for ya.